Today my Instructor tore apart my Noir short film storyboard,
He said that I needed a Inductive entrance, and mine was deductive.

For those of you who don't know what these are a Inductive entrance is where the audience is introduced to the setting, plot, and scene right from the start.

A Deductive entrance is where the camera shot will leave the audience in a state of wonder, and questioning on what they are watching.

Here are my first pagesof "Le Noir de shoelace"

This is a Deductive entrance